If it's crap ... We'll tell you
http://rpgmaker.net/games/3460/ (can be downloaded from here; need winrar)
Since I have finished this project for now I am going on to my next project a new Visual Novel (this one will not be slice of life, so don't worry) and a RPG with RPG MAKER VX (but since I barley know how to use VX so that has to be put on hold).
This time around I may give myself more time to finish my next VN because I'm just starting on concept art and the script is half done.
Note: It would be awesome is any of you could send me great beginner tutorials for VX.